Ford_rox

hard to follow, due to grammar errors, jumbled sentences, probably be better if it was edited more, for better flow. but just couldn't get past ch. 4 because it was just to confusing.

chapters are way to short, even with the unless re-caps, and run on sentences that feel like they are put in just to extend the content. Author needs to trim these down loose the recaps, and put more appropriate content and thought into the chapters. the stories isn't completely trash the potential plot line if he takes his time and improve he writing could make it a pretty good read. but I am dropping this one.

The premise for the story is interesting, so started reading it. unfortunately it's very difficult to follow, due to poor grammar with a bit more editing to correct this, I could see it being a very good read. Also another issue I had was using up several chapter for the MC to examine his stat bar and its functions. So I am bringing it for now hopefully the Auther re-edits the story so it is less confusing, or possibly gets someone to edit for them if possible. Best of luck and Keep at ti.

Grammer's a little rough, but tolerable. main character is written well in my opinion. starts a bit rough, but gets better, a few thing could be explained better, such as the stat box (starts with no mention of it, then it magically appears with no explanation on how he got it). but all in all a good read if you stick it out. Great job, look forward to the next chapters. [img=update]

I believe when you say 'which', you actually me 'wish'.

Read all the free chp., honestly not a bad read but the grammar and spelling take way from the story. Then you only get 30 chapter free, with the quality of writing I can't see myself investing coins to keep reading. My best to the Author, and I hope you don't drop it for those who are invested.

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Thoroughly enjoy this story, can't wait for more chapter. keep up the great work, and keep updating. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

pretty good read, grammars is good a few mistakes here and there but over all I like it. look forward to more chapter, keep up the good work.

the crow are the best.