Maybeshewill

Okay, it’s four chapters ending with “Thanks Shiro”

It feels like the last three chapters always end up with “Thanking Shiro”

Are you using mtl to write your review ?

Why didn’t he use rasenshuriken?

How else could the woman see him other than deceitful shameless opportunist? He blackmailed her right off the bat, ruined her efforts and swagger out like a champ.

Guess how many times authors used the word “intricate’?

These were some of the most useless chapters in the story. The women came, threatened, then died.

Honestly, for a person who knows almost nothing about Star Wars series like me, it’s very difficult to connect what’s happening in the novel. I have some knowledge on ObiWan, Anakin, Padme, Luke and Yoda, Sidious and little about Ashoka, and don’t know anything else. I don’t understand more than half of what you’ve written. Moreover you mixed it with Mass Effect, which again I know nothing about. So, although it’s somewhat entertaining to read, grammar mistakes and the narrative flying all over the place make it difficult for me to enjoy the novel. But, I always respect new authors trying their own fanfics and works! Good luck!

Come on man, upload em chapters faster! Pretty please?

Dude, it’s a ninja world, might makes right! 😁