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I’m not sure the reasons for changes, but if I had to guess is to create some plot that connects to the middle/end story. I personally don’t like much the changes, prefer the original approach where you don’t need to explain things in the beginning (like the reicarnation stuff), and get it uncover later as story progress. Have to add I read very little from that his rework so my opinion is based of the first few chapters.
A very good mecha story that ultimately fell apart because of the MC talent. Basically the more MC evolves the less important the mecha becomes… obviously the novel has no future. Probably abandoned or rushed to end.
To tell the true, what you point out is some of the main changes that author made to the original story in the first few chapters! Got me scratching my head. Kill me from reading this story right at the beginning, but I might be wrong as story goes along. Btw I quite like the original story, just felt author was getting lost by the end.
Read until around chapter 200, story has really good potential but feels to bipolar to me. From the MC going from angry to calm and vice verse. To being a chill story to a dramatic story. Maybe I didn’t connect well with the story or the author didint express well the kinda story wants to show. Overall is good but I wish you define more if you want any a chill out power level story, or a heavy dramatic one and flesh out around your type.
Tasteless… chapters so short should not be allowed.
Great idea for first mythic component, cd reduction of all components.
Once again we read that there where some conversations between MC and main family about is secrets, but we don’t know when and how… lazy author, love your book but this laziness about conversations post action and people reactions about MC actions is just sad, they mostly don’t exist, and when they do is just a brief mention so we don’t get lost. Feels to me like author just want to skip what he thinks is unimportant, but in doing so we lost the effect MC have on surrounding world. We can notice that surrounding family think of him like we do, but I don’t understand why because author don’t show any conversations/ actions that lead to them knowing as much as we do. I can live with this laziness but I am worried author will get impatient as story goes on.
Dude step on the accelerator! This author is good but can be so lazy on the details. Is like is running to finish the marriage and not writing about it for a long time😂 also he didint mention the super canon.
That canon is a class above super, can only be used after rank 7 I think. Probably buying back later.
This author sure is lazy with the details.what price for the red component? Only talks about the parts he use to upgrade. Seems like he got it for free👌