EldurJaalind
I am an author with multiple book series' that are ongoing.
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EldurJaalind1yrコメントAh, yes, consumerism.
Each floor had dozens of rooms with different types of VR gears in them, depending on what type of game one would play.- EldurJaalind1yrに返信 Jack_Nades
for real, where are my mediocre genes at?
Shay squinted his eyes and furrowed his brows at Zach, and said, "Who are you kidding?! You won a 10 million dollar lottery last week, didn't you?" - EldurJaalind1yrコメント
introducing characters like this is unnatural I'm sure you know this now, but I still find it worth mentioning. Instead of outright telling these things, you could use plot devices to show their dreams, circumstances, and physical traits.
Kayden, 18 years old, has dark brown hair, black eyes, and a bodybuilder. He was Zach's childhood friend. But unlike Zach, he was popular because of his sturdy build. He was going to inherit his father's tech business. - EldurJaalind2yrに返信 Zenna73
heck if I remember. been a while since I read it
"Daneel, such a solution cannot be made by one who is not at least an Eminent Warrior Mage. I've studied a small sample. The skill in magic required to cast a spell that uses such intricate particle manipulation is incomparable to any Exalted Human Mage like me. Of course, no matter how talented you are, it is impossible that you have reached that level. In fact, even the Grand Court Mage, who is the second strongest mage in the Kingdom, is also only an Exalted Human Mage. Who is the personage helping you, Daneel?" - EldurJaalind3yrに返信 Raisgem
I know, I was correcting, lol
Li's first reaction was to walk up to a tree and place his palm on its trunk. He realized then how distinctly inhuman he was. He was almost three meters tall with a body comprised of wood, leaves, and bones. - EldurJaalind3yrに返信 Khalil_Ziad_Issam
a bit late, but eh. a tiara is a crown typically worn by princesses.
This woman was most uncommon: gorgeous, elegant, and with one outstanding difference from all others in the hall—she wore a tiara. - EldurJaalind3yrに返信 Martin_Watson
easy calculation and inflation
In this world, the money was divided into four coins: copper, silver, gold, and royal coins. 100 copper=1 silver, 100silver=1 gold, and 100 gold=1 royal. - EldurJaalind3yrに返信 RaenattaCh 14 Chapter 14: Shattered Will
- EldurJaalind3yrに返信 RaenattaCh 1 Chapter 1: Insanity
- EldurJaalind3yrに返信 EMpulse
because one way he is forced into it.
If the conditions weren’t fulfilled, the option would be grayed out and unselectable. For example, the [morning jog] option to raise [physical ability] couldn’t be selected unless it was actually morning. But in the morning, it would light up and could be chosen. - EldurJaalind3yrに返信 Daoist638579
white is not a light color. there is, green, blue, violet, red, yellow, and one more if I remember correctly
この段落は削除されました。 - EldurJaalind3yrコメント
mildly ironic considering the absence of color is technically black... you see, colors are just light that's reflected. if red light is reflected off of an object, we call it red. and white is the reflection of all colors...
この段落は削除されました。 - EldurJaalind3yrに返信 TheArcher7
yeah, it's weird
Her bright blond hair flowed in the wind like waves and her long, decorated white dress followed in part while an air of nobility surrounds her. - EldurJaalind3yrに返信 Allen_Liu
intriguing
He would begin crafting. - EldurJaalind3yrに返信 Sonichu
it would just say wood
The wood was a dark color and relatively hard. From what he could tell, it would probably end up looking amazing once properly shaped. - EldurJaalind3yrに返信 Allen_Liu
I must know the reference
He would begin crafting. - EldurJaalind3yrに返信 SuperFightingRobot
Spoon
[Spoon] - EldurJaalind3yrに返信 ShyviaAngel
I'm a spider, so what? that one?
[Tree]