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Cardinal_Steiner

Cardinal_Steiner

Lv13
2019-11-08 入りましたGlobal
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  • Cardinal_Steiner
    Cardinal_Steiner5 months ago
    発表

    Guys, its a good book not unlike I am in Hollywood. Personally I didn’t find any problem with the grammar and the wish fulfillment aspect is there which is great. Definitely recommend. The only reason for not giving a 5 star is that you(author) claimed in the tags that this is a harem novel. I’m above 120 chapters now and there is NO sign of any harem. I’m not saying that the romance is bad. It’s actually one of the best dynamics I’ve read but I won’t deny i came for the harem in first place and it’s just not there. And inserting a harem after that much character dev between the MC and FMC will be unfavourable for the story. You should remove the harem tag at this point cause its deceiving if you claim and not deliver. This is the only reason I am thinking of dropping the novel as my reading preference is actually harem genre. Apart from that this is a great novel with interesting storyline and captivating development.

  • Cardinal_Steiner
    Cardinal_Steiner6 months ago
    発表

    Mc is emptionless. Sorry don’t like to read about robots. Prefer humans who don’t kill innocent desperate people to save others because they interest the MC. Everything else is fine. But in this era of emptionless and cruel MCs I’d really like someone to break the trend to write an MC who’s not either dense/ stupid/ too nice or inhuman/evil/ dark. These tropes are getting boring now.

  • Cardinal_Steiner
    Cardinal_Steiner7 months ago
    発表

    Im dropping it. Read 58 chapters now but it’s getting on my nerves now. The story is just a repetition of: mc gets woman, mc fucks woman on first encounter almost without any dialogue just asking for sex in return of his help, mc kills someone who talk to his woman and mc get more woman. I understand people need acruel mc but nowdays people foreget that there is a difference between cruelty and unreasonable. A guard askedone of his woman to take off the hood before entering the town and mc cut his arm off. He just asked as he was supposed to do cause that’s his job. This is just one of the examples and its getting frustrating everytime I read unnecessary cruelty. It just diminishes the value of the cruelty which has to be shown to real bad people. And the mc miamed everone who was ordered to harm him or his women but ran away from the real mastermind in fear. Like this is really frustrating. Dude show ruthlessness where it is required.🤦

  • Cardinal_Steiner
    Cardinal_Steiner7 months ago
    発表

    Disappointing, so disappointing. Thisbis the worst fanfic. Following are the reasons(spoiler alert) 1. MC’s world choice to reincarnate into: No explanation whatsoever on why he chose to reincarnate in that apocalyptic world full of beings that can easily massacre cities 2. MCs choice of powers: He asked for flash like abilities but severely toned down. Then a perfect body whose only use is thermal resistance. I wonder, if you knew what world you are going into why would you not choose something that can actually deal with the titans? Dumb*ss 3. MC’s lack of plans: He had 10-13 years of time to prepare for Shiganshina district’s fall. And all he did was use his powers to kill small animals and humans. Like he did not even think of what he would do if he encountered titans. Like bro you KNOW the future and you have nothing planned up. No training, no plan Bs. Nothing. He just let the tragedy happen. 4: MCs mom died because of his uselessness: the only use of a fanfic is to change events that everyone wished to be changed. This dumb MC cause of his lack of preparations and him being satisfied with pretending to be hero for two small girls, got his mother dead under a rock during Shiganshina’s fall. Like BUDDY YOU KNEW THE FUTURE AND YOU STILL DID NOTHING!!!!!!!! The novel said he was really sad after his mother dies but all he did was run away from the titans and even got his mother’s remaing got eaten by a titan. Like author how is this a fanfic if you are just going to replace Eren with mc and bothing else. 5. No change in the story: As i said and you can see, all the author did was replace Eren with the MC and nothing else. The story happens exactly like the original except in the position of Eren there is MC. How can this be a fanfic. Morover the chapter length os so short, you can barely get into the chapter and it finishes. So disappointing

  • Cardinal_Steiner
    Cardinal_Steiner8 months ago
    に返信 Mnorani

    Is it a harem?

  • Cardinal_Steiner
    Cardinal_Steiner8 months ago
    に返信 Celestial_Drake

    Wow bro, you replied to every single one of these. I am dying of laughter reading your responses “Look at the title”, “the title”, “title” 🤣🤣🤣. Thanks btw. I was asking cause there are some like “Riches and bit*hes” which dont have a harem despite the name. 😁👍

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  • Cardinal_Steiner
    Cardinal_Steiner8 months ago
    に返信 StewartReginald

    Is this a harem? There’s no tag

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  • Cardinal_Steiner
    Cardinal_Steiner8 months ago
    に返信 Unh0mbreDCultura

    Is this a harem? There’s no tag

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  • Cardinal_Steiner
    Cardinal_Steiner8 months ago
    に返信 fhjvvbjj

    Is this a harem? There’s no tag

    この本は削除されました。