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with aphrodite's connection with anna, i don't really want to see her become hostile with victor. it might not be a close relationship but being allies with vic would suit her better. it did not seem that the goddess was planning to do something to him considering her relationship with his mother.
i just hope that the yuri between the girls in the harem won't overshadow their feelings for the mc. i actually read something like that and made the mc of that novel look like an extra. it kind of pissed me off. i mean, it's not bad per se. i kind of get it... the development was realistic. but we all know we're reading the genre for that sweet wish-fulfillment, and that novel gave off a ntr vibes that the girls love each other more than the mc. lol
i think it was a nice change of pace. it made lilith a little more mundane than usual with her wanting to fit in zemin's family. it was a good direction for a character development, i think. in addition, it adds more to the romantic subplot of the novel which is not that prevalent in the first place. this mini arc needed to happen, after all, as zemin and lilith had conversations about this in the past chapters.
is this a setup???
this power up would make him super op though? he just brokethrough and can already skip to the next realm. his body too became too strong in an abrupt manner. i think that this is too fast, but the story's probably going to pick up with such power up. or else, every conflict would just get resolved with brute force.
that's true. he's probably just being overshadowed by bai zemin because of the proximity. if he were to be put in a different camp, he might have been able to stand out more.
will nent really betray sol? this and her ideals are really ominous... if she ever does, will sol be able to get her back? betrayals feel somewhat similar to 'ntr' after all...
author, will you be elaborating on alex's life back on earth? i think that the betrayal of his bestfriend back on earth was not developed enough. (only mentioned here and there) hence, us readers could not really feel much about the reason he became the way he is. it would be nice if that part was spared a couple of chapters to explore so that you could give alex character depth just a little.