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that's not really true, you can show that in a way better way, then just being apathetic.

you mean yours? get off your high horse bro. cope

I meant they didn't marry out of love

because masterchef is a thing by then in korea

except that wasn't the scene, there was no sounds really. and they were guarding the door. even if that was the case the phrasing is awful

apathy isn't attractive in light novels all it does is make it boring.

technically that only works if he can generate enough force to completley stop the effects of gravity and push past it. which would make just landing from that height perfectly fine the easier.

this is too much, like I get you wanted more interaction but this is taking it way ti far, it's just annoying.

wasn't instead of doesn't

I don't think it's boring, I just think you could work on your scenes and polish them up a little.