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Do you think it's the narration or the storyline that feels repetitive? I’ve noticed I repeat the MC’s fear of violence(which feels natural to me since most people today would be scared of it) and admiration for historical figures, which reflect my own feelings. I’d appreciate any feedback, as this is my first time writing and I want to improve.
Sorry about the confusion. When I started writing the novel, I hadn't chosen the MC's name, and I wanted to avoid using common names used in English works. It took me some time, and in the later chapters, I added the MC's name as 'Vidur Pant.' I've been busy with work recently, so I haven't updated the name in the earlier chapters yet. Thanks for reminding. I'll fix it as soon as I can.
thanks a lot it means a lot. will try to simplify it after publishing some draft chapters.