honestly 5★ just because I like the idea and it loaks promising

so will you continue to post here or stop posting here

hahaha thats a good one how much I have expirienced it not only did i se it coming naprotiv I have bean expecting it no author is so kind to his readers otherwise I wold think you are planing to drop this ff hahaha

honestly both but if I have to chose then loona why because I like bad girls and because when she is in love she becames obidient and lisens like a puppy

to influence and change the plot there are 5 fastest ways posible right now 1.win against sona 2.take your sister virginity 3.contact azazel and inform him of fallens actions of killing sg owners 4. intrcept meating beatwin asia and issei 5.cancel the weding... yea here is a plan beat sona in chess but act like it doesnt matter because you allready have fiance rias and then "acidentaly" let it slip that even if she wins her freadom it doesnt mater much because you will simply get sona again with sona being her Best friend she coldnt posibly have any more strenth or will to defy mariage and woldnt even try to escape on grifon her brother prepared in advance for her in case issei lost to riser in Canon

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whell when its beatwin loki and oc then I chouse loki as loang its not oc then again if you are making oc will members be from difrent anime like erza from fairy tail/ emilia from re zero/ AU darkness from konosuba if you are going with oc familija you can take bumch of anime characters whose powers could pass of with danmachi power system like the ones I just mentioned hahaha that wold be fun to se of course you tweak they personality a little to beater go with ff

happy new year

ok I wasnt allways so jumpy but after reading 100 chapters of some novels who had mc talk similarly and on some it even made situation worse it simply shortained my patience for those kind of situation today I was in moud for some cultivation type novel but with one where mc is reincarnated from modern world so thats how I found this work and because of the way he speaks it simply didnt allow me to inmerse in novel it simply seam so out of place for that kind of world if that was all part off character developmend then I apologise for rudnes eng is not my first leanguage and thanks for clarifaing some things then

jea I think this novel is not for me constant use of termin like bro and as such simply dont make me inmerse myself in novel and seriesly "shower" you dont se how misplaced that word is in cultivation type word "bath" is more fiting I dont understand how someone in that word wold even understand what mc mean by that and one more thing in what reality will "CULTIVATOR" shaut OH MY GOD and even devil path cultivator at that. His way of speaking and acting as well the unlogical way things are hapening simply make it tipe of novel im not interested im not saying novel is bad but it simply is not my cup of tea

fairy tail

I just loaked it up and I have to say that is intresting concept for a game

uh normaly I consider myself as someone who woldnt be bothered with most of cringe situation but this is over the line to much is to much

what are you talking obaut??? from title alone I allreadi recognize this work and I even cheked the chapters titles and from what I remember its the same thing so no this is him mostlikekly simply copy paste here evrithing matches from what I remember

is it posible to go without romance since this is afterall as you said harem anime and belive it or not no matter which girl you chouse it will came back and bite you because there are several good waifus even if you make oc it may be even worse then so why not forger romance complitly and if you nead emotiunal bond you can make it like siblings bond like older brother loaking and protecting his younger siblings so what do you say no romance for the win??? after all if there is no winners there is no lossers

harem is not bad as long as you cnow how to write them if its author who just wants readers and money then you get cach them all type which honestly is stupid then thre are People who just want to keap going like taking entire village(all female village) in harem then there are People who simply dont have patience to write and treat harem like add on to ff then again there are People who use premise of harem then end up pairing mc with only one girl or make MC sufer from harem members(potential) making it comedi there are those who just brute force it and those who make mc suffer from tragic past or some mental illnes that makes him loak pitiful and then there are authors who make mc desne as a brick of course they will leave bad impresion on harem tag because to make a good harem stori you nead right story setings good, character grouth, oportunities, patience, while not making harem main point but at the same time not add on to story but to integrate it in story smothly most people decide to concentrate on one girl until she is captured then focus on another while not making it official then introduce jeaolusy and atention competition to space things up and potencijaly ruening the rest of the story some authors even make mc ignore some girl just to make drama later so jea its hard to find someone who can make good story let alone one with a harem mix in it

hmm i think it was a bit fast still tolerable but maybe you shold hawe 2-3 chapters to make some firmer conection beatwin the two of them of course with a couple of chapters beatwin each of them so it wold make it seam more solid and all that making it more perfect but its still a pass if you ask me

I think he shold all ready have yang one because he is asura's reincarnation so I will treat it like he allready had yang affinity and yin affinity simply costed double the others ones

maybe if it did not take 2 hours and instead you gained them in 1 moment leats see if you would hawe a headeck

I am half half im ok with spiceing it a bit but nothing to much like breathing style