Alistone

So, with this chapter we have 18 chapters of this, 2 and a half weeks of this story and it's still going on! I love this novel, I really do, but it's starting to become really exhausting reading one chapter a day with barely any progress, it's almost like the story is crawling forward instead of normally progressing. I really hope this mini arc finishes in the next chapter

is it me or the chapters seem shorter?

I honestly think that this reunion was done very well, maybe it would have been nice having a chapter before this with Helena's pov but otherwise it was done very well. I think that the reunion (or non union, this is up to you) that should be more difficult should be Delfine's one, considering that she was the last to know and the one after Helena who took it worse than everyone else. I am very curious of that one honestly.

Don't worry I'm not disappointed, just really confused. Thanks for replying by the way💪🏻

I'm not really sure how to take the last 3 chapters, I need to read the next ones to better understand, but there were so many ways that he could have help Xara and Selene talk about everything, he himself knows it and decided that most chaotic way possible. I mean, why did he think that that moment in particular was the most adequate, considering that Vesperine and Velc were present? I don't know man, I hope that tomorrow's chapters will explain something. That said good job with everything, now I really can't wait for tomorrow.

It's really confusing to follow. I got what you wanted to do with the blackouts, kinda. Maybe it could have been more clear if you used the pov of one of the children or the Saintess. The idea was cool though.

I honestly like how things are going, both fronts are well written. The only thing that is making reading a bit heavy the last chapters is that the battles are taking too long and the plans that are unveiling seem more like an excuse to keep the fight going; I mean, the envolment of Dora and Mary Is understandable, they had their little part before so seeing them in the void cruddle Is ok, the presence of Sandra Is understandable too, even though Is a bit of a strech. But now the arrival of the Saintess that appear out of thin air to join the fight is a bit much. I would have understood if before the battle with master there was a chapter where Aerher contacted her or at least where the Saintess was hinted, that would have made Aerher's plan more credible and her presence justifide. That said I'm liking the fight and things but there isn't really a progression, it's almost 10 chapters that fight Is going on with master second phase and there has been only an exchange of hits and punches, one more powerfull than the other yes but only an exchange none less, and now all the wounds and damages are gone. That again I really like this novel and I've been following your work for almost a year now so keep up💪🏻💪🏻

Really a beautiful novel. I honestly hope to read more novels or works like this one and of this writer, considering that today is truly difficult to find something original like this novel.