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Okay, first of all. Who cares if I like Issei x Rias... Anyway, allow me to explain a few things: 1) This is a novel focusing on the MC and his heroines, so who knows what happened during the times the MC is not around Issei and Rias. (Mind you, with the MC in that world it's bound to be far more different) 2) the MC and Rias are childhood friends, although I'm not certain why your bothered over this but Anyway. when the MC stepped in due to anger about the engagement of Rias and Issei is political reason. political reason being due to gossips about people questioning the Gremory and Phenex head about their mentality, how this choice they made is far from being worth for a family head to make (Considering Risers reputation back then) this would influence businesses owned by them and their allies. And Masaru naturally has links with them, so in order to prevent that, he stepped in while using it as a excuse to help a friend. Remember Issei got Rias attention because he "sacrificed" something where as the MC did not which is also another factor. Well to put a conclusion, this is a novel and not reality, so naturally MANY things are possible to happen when the Author does not "write" about certain things. isn't this the loophole everyone uses to write FanFictions? In my case, it's the relationship between Rias and Issei since I did not bother about it. I left blanks for the readers discretion to imagine lol
Thanks for the suggestion, I appreciate it
Will try to do that today. Had a hectic week and even worked yesterday overtime hehe. Stay tuned
User: Kenrio Review: I love all your fanfic but I'm giving you one star because of the pathetic god title you give masaru 'wonder child' I become extremely disappointed in this story and lost all my enthusiasm I am only wanting that you end this faster now for you continue the other fics Response: 1 Star just for the God Title? ... Really?
I don't remember the chapter but it was during the monster defensive war in Bael Territory where Masaru gave the sword spirit the name Drago and the sword itself was named Deadheart. Drago Deadheart
Because I admit compared to other novels, mine still need to improve even more. Hehe, I'm a noob after all. Thanks for your support though, I appreciate it ^^
Shuri? No Venelana? No Misla? No Grayfia? No Griselda? No Gabriel? No Lady Sitri? No Lady Phenex? No Reason? #1 This is not a Netori Novel, so I will not destroy marraiges just because of a wish fulfillment. -.- (Please note: The MC did not steal any girls since he already had them before the canon mc. So it's not classified as NTR) #2 - Gabriel is simply impossible, her personality especially makes it impossible to become a member. Unless I change it drastically like some fanfictions, which I will not do. Too much of a hassle. #3 - Griselda? The MC is not Diodora, he does not have a Nun Fetish lol
Thanks for the review, I appreciate your honest and detailed opinion. Just want to mention that although there are parts where things appear "rushed" but do know that there is quite a lot of instances of Canon where the MC was not involved and many things could happen, especially with butterfly effect (Not going to write such chapters since I intend to focus on the MC as much as possible) As for Ravel? (It's complicated -.- I will have to reread my own book to see what I intended but) Yeah, I probably ended up leaving "blanks" where I no longer focused on Canon where "something" happened. (**: When I get time to reread I will come to answer this part again maybe?) Sona, now this is the billion dollar question and the answer for this is definitely in the book. It should give you a nice surprise ^^
Canon starts at Volume 3/4, kinda forgot since I just woke up lol
Moving onto the next chapter. (Campione) It's been a while, everyone, I saw your comments (Although some I could not see since there were too many comments to read except for chapter comments) Thank you for your continued support, and I am striving to complete this book despite having several inspirations to start other books. It's really hard to resist the urge to write another book despite already writing one currently. Now then, we came this far. Masaru is finally displaying his interest to his memories he could not recall. This is only a subplot mixed with the vampire plot so it will not hold much significance. And now the shadows of Qlippoth has been displayed, for Masaru, they might not be a threat. But for civilizations they are a calamity, now let us see how things would go from this point forward. (Hopefully, my shifts would normalize next week, or I will cry....)