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for the moment he explains to others (all might and nezu) what the aura is, does not put conditions of use even if he has shown a good part of these hatsu (those he has kept in the bank)[img=recommend]
I would like him to have the disguise skill for the next chapters because the polyjuice takes too much preparation time and you have to have a part of the person's body that you want to transform with the condition that the person is still urge .
the story goes too fast for my taste, like the MC who kisses his ex-girlfriend as soon as they meet (not enough development of their relationship in the new timeline). Not enough explanation on the length of time that the MC play from the beginning, to be able to have a point of reference. But the theme of the story I love it since they look like legendary mechanic but from the point of view of a player. In addition you added a difficulty mode which is new in my opinion or if it does not succeed their account is deleted.
I find it strange that the mc makes a business proposal to his father when he is only 11 years old. I understand that the father accepts because he has guilt. But I find it too direct and a little unrealistic that we a kid asks you to sponsor him.