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Nice story, but I would love to read an edited version of the story without the lame made up words like kushi. It really kills the vibe for me. It isn't like the primitives from another world are speaking English among themselves, it is accepted that we are reading their original language as English. Just why aren't all of the words translated for gods' sake?
The pointless purple prose is making the story hard to read. I hope it gets better in the future.
Mandatory summons can't be called a plea for help.
Isn't indispensable
Translation quality has become pretty hit and miss. There are some persistent mistakes that make me think translation team isn't going to bother doing better. I hope in the future there will be better translation and proofreading, but it is hard to enjoy in this state.
Awesome amazing astounding ancient and ancestral atrociously dark spell would be better if you were trying to make it even more ridiculous.
So we have house elves that can brew newt level potions in this setting?
I am honestly not sure what her name is. She is called Sai, Saya, Saa...
Maybe Ninjas wounded by jutsu are more likely to die instead of just getting injured and sent back home for treatment?
That's a big no no. I personally try to defend fellow doctors in front of the patients even if they had done something to be criticized. If it's a really important case I'll just call them and tell them personally that there may be trouble coming...
I would love to gain this ability. I can't manage to diagnose anything other than the most obvious myocardial infarctus and arrhythmias.
This just goes to show all the vaunted benevolence of Jedi Order is mostly as a reaction to the excess cruelty and violence of Sith Order. Ideally the Jedi were free to correct many injustices in the absence of a powerful Sith Order, eg. Sentinels would have been pretty instrumental in destroying criminal syndicates like Hutt cartels etc.
And? I know what types of different cells and tissues brain is composed of. Brain is not muscle in any sense. I don't understand why you felt the need to elaborate. It's like you writing a multi paragraph long comment telling me why a watermelon isn't a type of dog. If the reader isn't incredibly uneducated it's all obvious. Anyone can open a neuroanatomy book and see the anatomical and hystological details of cranium and brain.
Always a new name is used for the empire.
The constant references to Warhammer40k is kind of lame. The author should just write a Wh40k story instead of fanboying on this story.