Mama frieren

Nice pov

Lately the chapters are very short, it would be nice if the chapters were less frequent but longer.

It's similar to re:monster

A new mascot

Me too

Thank you very much for the recommendation, I will read it for sure, I also thank you for this announcement, I was beginning to have suspicions about you dropping it, and about the power Stones I apologize ... after several months giving power Stones every day became a habit, something like brushing your teeth when you wake up, the only times I have not given Stones is when there is no Internet in my home, So don't feel guilty, nowadays your fic is the only thing in my library that deserves power Stones.

The conversation with priska was very good, the mc's anger felt very real, priska has nothing to do with the mc's situation but the mc is not a fair person so it is very logical that he holds a grudge against her, I am very interested in seeing her future interactions, there are no eternal allies

It is normal that ioann is weak, he has been training for a short time, his sacred gear is not the most powerful, he spent most of his life in a church, I am sure that in about 20 years he will be much stronger, and when the canon begins he should already be at least comparable to satan.

Thanks to this conversation I realized what kind of person the author is, thank you very much, I will not waste my time reading garbage.

The development that priska had is great, it makes sense the changes you are making to the canon, much better work than the original author.

VerGood battle, good climax the end

Nice, rip and tear

Bye bye, all this time for nothing 👍

Ok

Pues tienes razón, solo que hay capítulos una vez al mes y si le sumas relleno no creo estar vivo para cuando se termine esta historia jajaja.

Todo esto es relleno verdad?

It's not bad, only that your 1st pov is very good, and I agree that an ancient being must communicate in a unique way, in dxd there are very old beings who speak like children of 15, if you can improve something that is wrong why not do it?

Esta muy bien, lo malo es que como solo es un capitulo al mes no me acuerdo de muchas cosas.

Your version of alchemy is fine, you could also use the alchemy of full metal alchemist, it doesn't really matter, since alchemy in dxd is very basic so you can do it as you want, and I like the interactions that the mc has, he still has the same personality but knows how to act to get better benefits.