Ninja_King_3834

He will have a mutation in the near future. But idk give me some ideas, and I’ll think about it.

I agree, it’s my weakest chapter. It was supposed to be a one shot chapter. But since it got popular I been writing and improving as I continue on. I would say my writing has improved

I agree

Like in real life where the godfather disguise themselves as a normal civilian so the feds don’t get them Richard is doing the same here. It’s better to have some weaknesses when in disguise to make your opponents see you weak and harmless. Also Richard hasn’t been staying idle as a squire. He been doing some shady stuff in the background. Hint:

This is Richard as the hooded man

These the the other men in the bottom floor. The real group talking before are on the second floor.

What kind of review is this. You’ve only read chapter one. Which is by far my weakest chapter. At least read to chapter 2.

Hint: He does grow in height. The growth pain gon be quite painful though. 😔