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wooo yeah, fricken love gaara!
bro giving Escanor vibes
I wish you good luck and god speed, and if you wanted too you can maybe write there on paper and just copy it with one of those mobile scanning apps. You'd be releasing chapters in blocks so you wouldn't really get much useful feedback from us that way but you still get to continue writing if thats what you want, and we get to continue reading.
While many fanfictions mostly deal with the same characters and places as the story they are placed in I find the ones that explore the things mentioned off hand in the story more interesting so i would suggest writing something having to do with the the other continent we don't really explore, and underground (i haven't read the second book yet so this may have changed). The underground is mentioned in the story as a deep corruption that even the gods avoid so i think a pathway that thrives in the underground like the Abyss pathway would be interesting. With it's main powers like something along the lines of earth manipulation, super strength, and an affinity with wealth and creation. I can see the 9th sequence being something like Miner giving the beyonder a strong body, the ability to find weaknesses in stone and dirt, night vision, and proficiency in tools. With later sequences being things like Gemologist, Forge Master, and Earth Whisperer giving powers to inspect and make items, control earth, etc... These are just examples I came up with on the spot and aren't very detailed but i think it would be cool.
You know despite being on this app for a while I always though people were just being mean when they called other reviewers bots because I said the same stuff. Like most of my reviews just say "good," with 5 stars but then after seeing this I was like "you know what I'm going to check," and there are in fact bots with no reading time and only reviews. I never actually thought that was a thing for reviews just things like chat bots on Twitch.
big yikes, hope you are doing okay
Kinda bad all things considered as it's often shown weapon and armor memories are a major part of a persons power. Sunny is an especially great example seeing how he literally couldn't beat his current nightmare without his sword and how his armor literally stopped him from dying like twice. This also means that Raian is going to be using a lot of charms
bit of a dig at sunny there
Don't you dare go hallow!
I think you can be proud to say that this is one of the best first stories someone has made in a while. Many who are first starting out make absolute garbage so well done.
Lies once more, at least an 8 out of 10 compared to all other books. This story has a lot of depth, and well thought out planning which many other books do not.
lies again, at least a 9 out of 10 as it is among the best that i have ever read. Look at my account I've read many.
lies, 10 out of 10 seeing as it's the best ever made
I'm glad you stood by it. It felt new, and unique.