Happy belated birthday authour! Completely understandable hiatus, but good to see you back nonetheless. Hopefully you find the drive again bc the story is very enjoyable😁
Really enjoyed the story so far. Good writing quality and creative spell ideas as well as a likeable MC. Hidden gem for sure. Hopefully we get more chapters soon!
"What do you think should we do with the Stonefrog Gang?" Lilith asked as having a Gang chasing them might be annoying. Arthur, hearing Lilith's question, thought about it. What should they do about the Gang? Arthur wanted to avoid the Gang, but since they killed the Gang's Little Brother. They would probably get hunted down. They should leave at Noon and leave the City tomorrow. It was a simple plan for the two of them.
Loving the story so far, only issue i have is with the tenses ie. ‘would have’ . Correct in some places but often incorrect. an editing software like grammarly would be really helpful.