Rais_Hill

Can you at least get all the chapters in order before you release them

I REALLY did not like this chapter!

This story is extremely disappointing I'm 1,300 chapters in just because I'm too stubborn to give up. Most of this story is just a mishmash of plot holes and new wives added to the harem. Whenever a girl meets William shes almost instantly enamored and next thing you know there's like 4 chapters dedicated to a bedroom scene.

It's weird that it says 14 chapters a week when there isn't even 1 chapter a week. Pretty sure the author stopped writing.

I'm on chapter 258 and the MC hasn't awakened or made it to the capital yet. He doesn't even seem like he's remotely close to reaching the capital. It's like the author has forgotten what the MC's goal is and is just bogging him down with side quests.

SPOILERS I've read up to 620 and I feel like I'm just being trolled by the author at this point. The author just decides to destroy the world that Gabriel/Karyk is from for absolutely no reason. Also whenever Gabriel/Karyk decides to kill or betray someone, it just miraculously happens that they had ulterior motives all along.

The romance in this novel is really grating. It feels like it's been written by someone who hasn't been in any relation ships. The female love interests all fall in love with the MC almost immediately when he meets them. A trip to an auction turns into the MC getting forced into two marriages.

There's so many inconsistencies chapter to chapter that I wonder if the author even remembers what they've written in previous chapters. Also a lot of chapters are redundant where nothing new happens just a bunch of fluff.

This story has so much tragedy everything is always going wrong