parthu_dinakar

The story is good, but the latest chapters seem to have he same content, and they are not defined properly. But good job

No, his distrustful nature should be present. Think writing an agreeable Danzo plot with Danzo being a moral MC

Try a single female lead, as it is having real life people

For the birth of next chapter

Bro upload a new chapter for the other novel too

bro, don't leave us like this. It's worse than withdrawals 😫 😞

bro, if possible, change the gender of mc to male, no hate to fem. mc but its hard to relate

Hi there, I don't really see fanfics or light novels on hip hop, so I want this to continue. PLS

Bro pls make a great story even with slow releases. This is highly recommended for the most popular movies.

This might be for the first chapter but a story lie this has so much potential so please dot drop it 🙏. LPG phase in India is very critical for plot and I am invested for that. Please bro go for it and again don't drop.