DefinitelyNot

Its just unreadable. The original world background sounded somewhat interesting, with another "reincarnation to try again" genre. With this big of a cheat, the MC is guaranteed to do very well already. Except the 10,000X Upgrade System makes the main character so absurdly powerful that after 5 chapters the MC is a literal one man army able to slay gods. There are no meaningful side characters. There are no meaningful antagonists. The main character trumps everything by virtue of existing.

what is "the compound of section B"? Perhaps use "The Section B Compound"?

"If I had a better..." -> "If I had better"

appears to be a run-on sentence. suggest "as better psyon..." -> "since better psyon"

missing end punctuation

missing end punctuation

missing end punctuation, suggest comma

view paragraph comments, put changes there

wakened -> weakened

shuder -> shudder