don_offl
Author of Rise of the Legendary Emperor, Hitman with a Badass System & Anti Hero with a Symbiote System. Bringing stories to life and living through my characters.
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Update: Fixed the chapter and rewrote it completely. Please let me know how the chapter reads now
Hi, I noticed that but those chapters were written during when i had covid so i messed up pretty bad. But the upcoming chapters have been edited and you can see the difference
I can understand why you feel like that. And to be honest, i have mentioned in the chapter how Victoria's behaviour surprised Draven. There is a good reason why she attacked him, if you have read Moonblade arc, you might have guessed why
Thank you atlas. I have fixed the mistakes. Thank you again for taking the time to read my book
Just give it a go and read a few more chapters...you might want to stick around when he breaks out the prison
hello
If you dont interact with your reader, you can never be a better writer imo. that is why i always read all the comments and respond to them as much as i can
you just have to wait 2 chapters, not 300. I wrote long chapters bcz if i wrote short chapters, it will make u spend more coins until the MC appears. that is why i wrote long chapters when the MC is not in the chapter so u can get it over with in one single chapter
It should have been Noah's plan. Edited it
lol a funny mistake,it should be Gaya
it was a mistake. Updated the chapter. Please make sure to read it. Sorry for the mistake
I am glad to hear that. But you are right, i hate making readers pay more coins for repeated things, That is why i always update the chapter first and then add some fillers needed for the chapter so the fillers wont be counted in the final word count. Sometimes adding these things and editing them again would cause a problem.