AkiraLight
Just a Sage looking for a Hidden Gem.
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Great story and read, only issue is the update stability and paid chapters. By the time new chapters are updated and you already bought into the paid chapters their gonna expire. The Author doesn’t release like 5 new chapters to replace the 4 already read under paid chapters so your essentially paying 200+ coins to unlock 1 chapter. I’m fine with the slow releases but it doesn’t work in the Authors case with the slow updates as he’s now putting up barriers that only a idiot who doesn’t care would buy into
The fight scene was okay a bit crude in the way it started, if you explained he was in a trance or built up towards it it would of been fine, it felt a bit sudden (the initial engagement) every time something serious occurs try to build up momentum and you’ll do fine :)
😂😂😂 you probably could and it would be seen as a valid response