Wallabalooza

Ah yeah, the common Finnish name "Ah Ji". Come on man.

Why are you acting like hiccups are common when drunk.. or even required for him to appear drunk. This scene felt very cartoonish.

Was really hoping you'd avoid the cliché the story had so obviously been building towards. Disappointing.

Extremely low quality writing and a writer who clearly deletes all negative reviews. Pathetic.

Did you happen to swallow a large amount of glue as a child?

lol people taking unproven rumors of canon Ashara, blowing them up a few sizes and calling them fact. Did you even actually read the books? There are rumors of Ashara MAYBE sleeping with one guy at Harrenhal and of getting pregnant (at some point, could be from the same event or the same guy, we simply don't know, if it even happened in the first place), losing the child. Saying she slept with more men than a Lyseni whore is some ******** delusional fanfiction. Having said that, spineless simp MCs are the worst and there's no way I'll read this now.

Even if this is a pretty bad story, you need to get the fúck out of here with those editors notes. Your thoughts are not important nor interesting. All they do is break the little immersion there is.

Lots of them don't, so not really.

Yeah. If you log out of your account and check, the review isn't there. It's just cleverly still showing as up for you so you won't bitch about it. Garbage system.

Looks like the author hid this review lol. Now they don't even have to face backslash from removing reviews.