Vikram_Bij

just gonna read this and giving this review because my jersey number is 77 and my fav number is 7.

thank you for replying 🙌, excited for more chapters.

really liked it, very fresh concept and powers, will be fun to see how the story develops. could you please what timeline this is though? and a request, don't make it a harem please.

please don't add harem, it honestly ruins the novel, and if you want add NSFW scenes please do this mc is like atleast adult. otherwise this will be another pedo stuff

yea, and if romance is needed then add it later on, not so early in the series and let it not be the main focus plsss

I think she technically hits menopause before he even comes of age, so doesn't make much sense unless mc is older or of similar age.

laena - this could be alright honestly and completely depends on how you portray it . new oc - this seems like best option in my opinion but would be hectic for you to write. jeyne arryn - could be interesting. rhaenyra - too many fics and the plot will be pretty clear if she marries him, so story won't be as interesting. haelena - please no, mc would be of age before she is even born so doesn't make much sense unless he becomes a pedo or grooms her. rhaenys - please no - in my opinion please don't go for rhaenys as she is too old for him, she has child of the same age, would be damn weird honestly. if mc was already a adult or similar age it would make sense.

really liked past 3 chapters🙌, can't wait to see how story unfolds now.

i really like the story and the concept but when i hear the conversations of rhaenys and corlys, it's like they keep saying same shit again and again, their observations and conversation with mc and etc. are too repatative and it becomes quite annoying to read. i mean it's 8-10 year old mc, so too much philosophy for him, so please keep the interactions logical. i really liked the first chapter in that regard.

personally one of the best hp fanfiction i have read recently. it has fresh plot and i hope it diverges from canon quite a bit and please no harem.