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spaced sentencing can go to hell, not mad at you just mad at the way the sentences are structured. if you can please make them flow better

im gong to lmfao if zeno says "DAD!!"

from this chapter onwards is from a different story. please fix it.

heh,heh,heh

I feel like you missed a chapter before this one .

thanks for coming back! been waiting forever

you know I've been on a role reading a bunch of doulou novels here and yesterday I thought about why wasn't there a pangu axe ms for a protagonist and here we are.

nicely done