Tony_Jones_5420

This entire chapter was uncomfortable. I hate people that cheat. The fact that he thought about it means he knew it was wrong. Love the story but this stuff makes me want to drop it. Sorry

Like the writing and idea of the moon system. Only real problem is the standard mic that doesn’t care about others. Almost feels like mic is playing a video game and is not living in the world.

This story is a big what if a fan made all our favorite movies. I get so hyped I just want to see these movies get made in real life and get depressed when I keep seeing studios destroy our favorite ip’s

What happened to the system from the first chapters. He used to have quests and a somewhat store. Then it was only Nigel now there is nothing

Too short already in supernatural

He was too young still in Harry potter

These Chinese characters are always so detached. I’m not a kid so I can sacrifice a little girl and my mom

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Your writing is good and loving the story. It just feels like when I was a kid watching dbz lol. Good things are about to happen but it’s always next time on dragon ball z😂

I turned and met a new person said hi. End chapter