Cannizzo_Sam

it's incredible, plz dont stop ! I love Beyblade so much and your character is cool!

touché 🎯

hopefully this time you'll keep updating ! 👌

yeah a bit too op I'd say as sorry but the Ogre is much stronger than maki or toji

because the guy is one of the first sorcerer or maybe even the very first. the story start 10000 years before JC, and the guy's technique allows him to take full advantage of all the time he has before the start of the plot

A really interesting douluo dalu fanfic ! I just hope that he doesn't make Tang San and other protagonists ridiculous and weak compare to the MC. It's much more interesting when there's true fight to see who's the best and not a one-sided beat down even though Tang San has tons of cheats

Love it 🔥 For special grade seeds, I think you can either make the MC be able to choose the effects like shinigami, sense enhancing... but at the spécial grade level or each special grade seed is unique 👌

Love the mc, the background of the story and the adding of démon slayers 👌 I just feel like you're fusing a bit too many other anime lore in it, like Shaman King was okay but Bleach is way too much. I just hope you will stop there and not add something else or at most stuff like HxH and Baki but don't start with multiversal stuff like marvel, dragon ball... Bleach seems like a good enough origin for the World and celling

love your jujutsu fic, I can see that no matter how strong he become it will still be "reasonable" compare to other in which the mc is overpowered for no reason whatsoever 👌

i really like the magic and timeline that you chose for your story 👍