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I had to drop it for those same reasons. It’s almost like I’m reading about someone telling there life story than an actual story. The author also does a lot of telling and not showing. “I broke something so hestia screamed at me”, “I did this and then this happened”. I see this is a constant problem throughout the whole book.

This is why I hope all diseases die. Hope u feel better tomar bro

Please tell me she’s not gonna die author

I’d have to agree with this

When’s the next chapter?

I feel the same bro. This was a whole chapter of monologue

My only issue with the story is the slow updates. Otherwise the book is fantastic, keep up the good work!!

Freakin Fantastic chapter bro. Keep it up

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I feel the same same way bro. She just kissed essentially royalty and she gets a slap on the wrist, like come on man that’s just bs