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Jaxiel

Jaxiel

Lv11

(ON REVISING STORY - That Overpowered Friend) Learning how to write~ Also posting stories in RoyalRoadLegends :)

2019-06-15 入りましたGlobal
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1.3h

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106

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  • Jaxiel
    Jaxiel6mth
    発表

    Ayt, another isekai goin to my library. Just like what other comments says, your writing is amazing, you go in depth on certain aspects. this is some good shit.

    Null Reincarnation - Return Of The Fourth Primordial
    ファンタジー · cosmicslime
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  • Jaxiel
    Jaxiel6mth
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    Eyyy we go isekai again. Always excited to see when someone creates one. A unique approach, summary made me remember a certain manwha, your writing is amazing, all in all goods.

    Screw the Plot! I'll Save the Villain!
    ファンタジー · Goosey_Goo
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  • Jaxiel
    Jaxiel6mth
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    I do see passion in your writing, just gotta get better at spelling. The paragraphs are a bit too tight to read but understandable. Interesting read just needs a lot of polishing. :DD

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  • Jaxiel
    Jaxiel7mth
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    You go in-depth when explaining scenes, def good quality writing. A good zombie concept for the story, title's almost similar to danmachi anime lol. chapters are quite long though but I guess that's more content.

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  • Jaxiel
    Jaxiel7mth
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    Already, your synopsis is intriguing. The way go in-depth through your description is pretty impressive. your quality is def. 5/5. though there are some parts where sentences get a bit cramped and hard to read. Still, its worth the read

    Caldrea : The Beginning
    ファンタジー · dkantol
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  • Jaxiel
    Jaxiel7mth
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    Sheeeeeeeeeesh, that was fire. its Saitama, already a 5/5 also, interestingly quite Good for an OPM Fanfic. Have a try, worth the read. --

    One Punch Man: Saitama Retires
    アニメ·コミックス · KetchupxD
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  • Jaxiel
    Jaxiel7mth
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    Haven't read zombie apocalypse in a while, its good. Also, your comedy is gold. Impressive how created a story out of a discord chat. worth to give a read for fun.

    Discord to Zombies
    現実 · Dark_Ember_7708
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  • Jaxiel
    Jaxiel7mth
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    Bruh, your writing style is already amazing. It isn't too straightforward yet still have dept on it. Anything else is just as good as your writing, worth giving a try

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  • Jaxiel
    Jaxiel8mth
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    It's intriguing, although the dialogue could do some work and also the synopsis. There potential with the concept, keep writing you got a good story to tell.

    Betrayed By My Comrade
    都市 · Chrisy_Garry
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  • Jaxiel
    Jaxiel8mth
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    Bruh this is so cool. Your writing is precise. The depth is just simple yet still elaborative, keep on writing, I'm still on a few chapters, and this has potential. def 5/5.

    I Only Have Support Skills
    都市 · Lncea
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  • Jaxiel
    Jaxiel8mth
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    just by the writing, it's simple yet intriguing. also, the depth of your writing is just the right amount. Not much to say cause the other comments already said it. Easy to read, give this one a try if you're interested. :DD

    Like Strawberry Candy
    若者 · XanaTrygg
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  • Jaxiel
    Jaxiel8mth
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    The story is intriguing, though the pacing is a bit fast. The paragraphs are too compact as well, it makes harder for the reader to read. still, worth a try reading it.

    I am the son of a gamer and a goddess
    ファンタジー · DionfhelCuyno
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  • Jaxiel
    Jaxiel8mth
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    The writing is already quite good just from a few reads, it's a good idea telling the story from both of their perspectives. Worth the read, give it a try :DD

    Contract Wife Of The Billionaire
    都市 · Bella456
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  • Jaxiel
    Jaxiel8mth
    発表

    Just a few chapters in, world-building is already amazing. good writing quality as well, also I saw there's fanservice. I definitely need to read more Hahahaha

    REVENGE OF THE BASTARD CHILD : I BECAME MY WIFE'S SON
    ファンタジー · HIGHLIBIDO
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  • Jaxiel
    Jaxiel8mth
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    Hands down, I'm intrigued, the story has quite the potential. There were times though when the dialogue was confusing as to whom is speaking. Still, definitely worth the read.

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  • Jaxiel
    Jaxiel8mth
    に返信 HelenBold

    heloo, I'll be uploading chaps each day for now for the prologue, the first arc is still on the making atm. ty for reading though :DD

    Ch 4 IV. Acquaintances?
    Wonder System
    都市 · Jaxiel
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  • Jaxiel
    Jaxiel8mth
    発表

    Already a bit of a mystery just by a few chapters and I'm intrigued by it. All in all, good to give it a go, you'd keep yourself reading for more.

    ARIANNA’S CHOICE: Crowns Or Fangs
    ファンタジー · Success_Moses_9345
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  • Jaxiel
    Jaxiel8mth
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    Revenge/drama story, simple synopsis that tells it all. already quite intrigue by the first three chapters. quality of writing is ok but still worth to give a go.

    Secret That Lies In The Heart
    ファンタジー · Favi_gold
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  • Jaxiel
    Jaxiel2yr
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    That was such great writing. Also, the plot seems really interesting. It often gives a lot of thrill to the audience which is amazing. Overall worth the read.

    THE UNDEAD LACKEYS
    ファンタジー · Hyneks
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  • Jaxiel
    Jaxiel2yr
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    Gotta commend the author's writing, it's really good. The characters are easily lovable. Also an interesting plot about different races, without a doubt the storyline is amazing. Overall it's worth a read.

    Rainy Rose
    書籍·文学 · Kurosaki_neko
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