Kaul_Deapsea

Overpowered from the get go, strange but I'll roll with it. I dislike Hinata's characterization, of course you can say it is faithful to the original, but I disliked it in the original too. I am curious of the events of the rest of the book, but I wasn't feeling this chapter.

I have been told that it obligatory to review your own book, but I do hope you enjoy the book .

Thanks. For taking the time to comment.

Thanks, I had been feeling like I was writing on a dessert island or something. Your comment are super encouraging

Yes, while I do think he deserves to be a Hokage I want Naruto to be given the title when he most deserved it. Which is after the war.

I think it's the vestibule. It's clear that everyone around him knew the strategy and with him not having the will to do anything the vestibule took over. Thats what I think at least.

I never thought I would get the most complete representation of a panic attack from Antony of all ants.

I truly can't comprehend how such a wonderful book could be so good but fall off in such a way turning into a Uroboros of its own and reusing characters. Disobeying it's own laws and assassinating it's own setups. I am left in awe of how a person can demolish such wonderful work. Not to mention the insecurity the author feels to tell us time and again through the MC that the story belongs to him. And also if you want guys to be part of the harem there were way better characters we got to know early that would have been awesome.

This is too direct for politics say something like "Our troops have family in the north and it is the duty of the Crown to defend all its citizens. We cannot shrink back just because of the eagerness of the mad Queen."

Man there is a lot of 'On top of that' s.