saske_uchi
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saske_uchia month ago発表The story would have been better if it wasn't constant face slapping . I could only take the first 30 chapters and was fed up with the side characters.
- saske_uchi3 months agoコメント
what the heck is a four legged snake [img=disgusted]
- saske_uchi4 months ago発表
The concept is good but the story building is not interesting. It is not an indulging story where every part becomes exciting.
- saske_uchia year ago発表
Novel is quite good but the updates are very rare.
- saske_uchia year ago発表
I read around 10 chapters. The character and story development is not well written there's a lot of scope for improvement. the genre shows its comedy but there wasn't anything of such.
- saske_uchi2 years agoに返信 saske_uchi
change cover picture
- saske_uchi2 years ago発表
Hey Author. i have been reading/following this novel from the start. Thank you for the great novel and timely updates. change the cover to the previous one as this one doesn't look good
- saske_uchi2 years agoコメント
Great chapter. can you release 2-3 chapters a day.
- saske_uchi2 years agoに返信 Prohane_Oulak
pay coins
- saske_uchi2 years ago発表
If you don't mind I would suggest you to change the name of MC. It's been hectic reading an Indian name as we have been reading lots of Chinese or short English names.. It's just relating or i would say immersing into novel with that name is making it hard with that name It's a very small work it would be great if you can make it happen. Do work on changing Chapter one grammar a bit, try using grammerly. All the best for the novel.
