Mikhalexa123
Hey if u found this random blog then hope u enjoy. This account is off. N these stories r the one I made in my cringy era (13 years old) so don't be shocked.
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Well ,now the details was getting better and better man .The thing I said right at the last chapter was about the view details ,and now you've add it with the creatures of the forest and I like it .Keep it up ,I've nothing to say anymore ,it's good (•̀ᴗ•́)و ̑̑
I see ,this style seems like script writing for me (actually I didn't really know what's script writing, but I think this style is similar to script writing like for a theater drama show or something ,it's good in my opinion tho) the details of expression is good in this script writing style .Maybe you could add some little view details like the house colour or something (even though this isn't really necessary) but still it's up to your style and keep it up man (•̀ᴗ•́)و ̑̑
Thank you !But if you want to join some contest in webnovel I think it's kinda hard ,especially the contest usually refers to romance with limited themes ,like they have so many requirement that 'maybe' some people felt forced to make the story . It's okay to start here first ,i mean not in contests but in original platform .Hope you doing well (•̀ᴗ•́)و ̑̑ [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
And I love how you could have good chapters titles 😂😂 mine is ruined .And did you ever think of joining a contest one day ,since you couldn't post your novel to the contest (you have to make a new novel for the contest ,sometimes it's irritating) just asking ,don't overdo it ,you can finish this great story first ,but if you're joining a contest then tell me (•̀ᴗ•́)و ̑̑
Maybe if everyone are confused to read it ,I could make some small hints . "...." means the characters said it. (...) means they said it in their mind or think . [....] means that there's some magic words or magic screens that appeared . I hope this helps
Ih gileee udh ada ver inggrisnyaaaa [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] keren kaka !Maaf baru baca sekarang setelah di 'remake' (mungkin ?Karna chapter terbaru sebelumnya udh dihapus). Mangat kaka !Tetep lanjut ya~ (•̀ᴗ•́)و ̑̑ (๑>ᴗ<๑)