Hi can anybody tell me if the romance with Rachel goes anywhere? I read the free chapters, but won't read one if there is no interaction or relationship development in the next 100?
The Asura Royal Family is currently composed of Empress Leia, Marcus, Carmen, Leia's sister, and 3 ancestors. As for the other members? They died. The only reason the Asura Empire is still standing is that it still has allies who are pretty powerful. But you cant always depend on other people. God knows when they might bite you.
im going to sleep. i dont want to read about slimey, elfgirl and simp mc, sorry.
"Thank you for all you did. Thank you for helping kill the dragon and avenging my friends. It's because of you that they are able to rest at peace! I'll never be able to repay that debt so allow me to walk beside you to grow strong enough to protect those I care about!"
Pretty funny and interesting world, with a crazy mc, but the dialogue leaves a bit to be asked, as it doesn't sound natural.
Funny moments though and full of action.
She was a very attractive woman, clad in a tight, long black dress. Her curves made her the perfect example for the golden ratio. She had short, attention-catching ginger hair, and her fair face had a very heroic quality. She lifted her chin up slightly, while her proud and confident eyes swept across every freshman's face.
i think its a little bit to harsh. but maybe im too nice?
In the Dawning Forum, the freshman forum was not just a place for open discussion. The more important part of the forum was equipment transactions for new students, which were carried out in a section of the forum dedicated to trading. The ban took effect there as well…
Things like, "Please don't touch me with your filthy hands you pile of whale shit." Or, "Your existence is both unneeded and unwanted, please quietly die in a corner you maggot."