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A well crafted crime romance amalgamation. I'm still in awe the way every scene is so easy to visualise whole scene of the room test. Moving on to the fist fight of chief and Jack, the leaps and punches were effortlessly playing in my head. The disguise of other folks, the tension in atmosphere, the whole scenario of Sarah- Jack meet up is amazing! Just waiting when he will actually step inside the house, after tackling all the goons and assassins.
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A review by Aysel here, you know what it means ;) I won't say much because I personally know the author and her writing. Just give it a go and you won't regret it. â€ð
There are just lots of flashbacks indicated to explain such things
Yup yup, you're right
The chapter length feels 500 words, please extend it to standard 1k words at least.