Yes, the chapters are really short since it's a fast read :D

Thanks. Your comment means a lot. I'll try to update this fanfic more often.

Thanks for reading and thanks for pointing out this error. I've fixed it.

Hey, I'd really need that. Thanks for offering your help XD

hello, thank you for the in-depth analysis of Artificial mates. I really love your opinion. I hope you stick around you can read my others books meanwhile.

Wait, did I misread something? The first paragraph was very confusing. I didn't know who is talking...

You're welcome. I'll do my best :D

this is a nice one

Thank you for reading. sorry for the cliffhanger.

thanks for the review. If you come across any errors please say so. I'll do my best to clean my story. I'm updating slowly.

I mainly post my 1st draft on WN for feedback. Do her childlike features bother you or it is just her personality?

Reason?

Dalgculbi is a sacred ritual to decide who is the strongest and wisest warrior. Since this planet has a larger circle around its sun, their year is longer...Dalgculbi is a yearly event equivalent to every 15 earth years. Nug'drad is the name of the race. Meaning Golden guardians.

Thank you for your review, means a lot to me.

Thank you for considering my work. Webnovel already proposed a contract that I didn't sign cause my series will be self-published when I finish the second draft. If you want to support indie authors buy their books.

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Thank you for your comment today will do a mass update as it's the last day of 2020.

The cover hooked me and the premise made me jump in, lurking me to read some epic story. Unfortunately, it was not the case. That first chapter killed it for me. The grammar and writing were terrible but I pushed through expecting some ameliorations or at least a main character that will help me struggle through the errors poking my eyes. I'm not saying the story is bad. The ideas are good but the execution is terrible. Dear author, please, don't give up. But I beg you to fix your writing.

I get your point but this is a fanfic. I have a love/hate relationship with twilight. So you will see a lot of "humour au second degré" translation sarcasm ;)

thanks a lot for the support. Sorry for the slow updates XD