Antoine_Perez

the story pacing is sooooo slow... the author dwells on thoughts of chracters even insignificant thoughts an doften repetitive.

author you know what? your dragging the story....idwelling on thoughts of minor characters...if this is the phase you have scammed us of our coins

the story tends to drag, many unnecessary filers or chapters are added to make the story longer. .it focus on certain emotions of the FL.

zhao zho is the most SELFISH and Self centered 2nd FL

song lefie youre the man...Xin zhaozho is the most pretentioness 2nd FL in. web novel...

fgrrr to xin zhaoxho

agree he is really simple minded...

both of these side characters are not good. end their story and move on to the next

no fighting spirit at al so passive to accept it..hmp change the FL pls

agree their story is just going around circles....what a waste of coins