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I'll try to fix this issue. Maybe lengthening the chapter should suffice...

I rate this story five stars because it deserves to be rated that way. It has interesting concepts of a power system which is unique and new. The cultural addition to the story too piqued my interest. It is well woven into the story making a well defined narrative. I will check this story from time to time and add it in my collection. Thank you for introducing your story to me. It is a good read!

First Impression This story is relatable to my childhood anime shows. It is similar to that famous shoujo school girl sailor student anime shows. It is a fun read, I recommend this story if you are interested with the genre. In depth review I never thought that this story was a fanfic. The premise is way original and the way the story unfolds is different. Although there were elements I see which were similar to an anime I saw. I found this story standing out. The pacing was fine, not overwhelming and gives us time to digest what the story was all about. The character was relatable also, with the character's perks being likeable as well. Lastly, the writing quality is good. It's detailed and describes the scenes well. Closing I had fun reading this story. I see that the author is dedicated in writing. To the author, keep up your good work. There's a lot in store for you and this story.

Thank you for introducing to me your story. I will read nine chapters more to continue with the review.

Thanks for pointing this out. I will edit this error.

Overall This work has a good story and I won't spoil it. The plot is interesting and the flow of the story is good. It is very readable and the author has a good grasp of storytelling. The pacing is fine, not too fast or slow. Pros Action packed, well paced and has a good MC. Not too overpowered, but can fend for himself if needed. MC is good natured and likeable. Cons MC was too submissive, but I can understand because of his circumstances. He lived in a world where humans are not the top of the food chain. Others Reminds me of Conan the Barbarian or Berserk. Sadly, the MC just faced overwhelming odds against his favor.

I cannot help but praise the author of the skill displayed in writing this novel. This is not the usual stuff you read in this platform. This story is one of the best I read. Also, the chapter update is solid I believe that this work will reach a milestone within the suceeding months. Keep writing, you have made a good work. It only needs exposure!

This is a work of art! I salute you for your writing. 👌

This is an interesting story. It's dark and does not fit to everyone's taste. I will not spoil the story but here is my take: The scenes are well described and the story is engaging to read. I can really sense and feel the character's reaction and emotions reading the story. It's really a dark start and I can tell the reader had invested in the story itself. I am giving this story an overall perfect 5.0 for its potential. I can see the writer did a good job. Keep writing, you have done well!

This fanfic is good and so far faithful to the original. The MC is also likeable. I have no complaints about this story. Keep up the good work!