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https://www.patreon.com/0Jordinio0 https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12796968/1/Pokemon-Jordinio-Version

2019-05-15 入りましたUnited Kingdom
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  • 0_Jordinio_0
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    に返信 EternalEden

    No I mean Smiley the Axolotl fruit, Caesar planned to use him as a bio weapon, and when he set it off, he'd be near by with a basket of apples and the fruit would reincarnate into one of them. And in fact as shown doing it before and the fruit reincarnating.

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  • 0_Jordinio_0
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    に返信 EternalEden

    Except that's canonically how it works. As shown with Smiley's fruit and gas boys plans with it.

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  • 0_Jordinio_0
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    に返信 Arcann_Valerious

    Hiruko and Shin huh? Hmm, you'll just have to wait and see, like at the third round of the exams.

    Now, after sealing the stone or rather Fragment of Gelel into the Heavenly Star Seal on his shoulder and setting it up the in the same way as the star chakra, the colour of Daiki's own chakra had shifted into a dark green that seemed to almost border on grey.
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  • 0_Jordinio_0
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    に返信 Arcann_Valerious

    No doesn't work like that. Natural energy is what the Cursed Seal takes in, and basically enhances the body and chakra creating what is known as sage transformation, it's similar but not the same as nature chakra which is a perfect combination of natural energy, spiritual energy and physical energy. Both however can be used at the same time, both Sage Transformation and Senjutsu. The seal however does draw in natural energy naturally and would allow him to maintain Sage Mode when he learns how to do it, without standing still.

    Now, after sealing the stone or rather Fragment of Gelel into the Heavenly Star Seal on his shoulder and setting it up the in the same way as the star chakra, the colour of Daiki's own chakra had shifted into a dark green that seemed to almost border on grey.
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  • 0_Jordinio_0
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    に返信 Riger82_

    Yes they can actually. It isn't a democracy, it's a military dictatorship. Just cuz the Hokage are kind to their people doesn't change that. The Hokage's word is law.

    And well, Daiki was pretty sure he could get rid of the Cage Bird Seal, plus he was in line to be Hokage so he could force the issue of abolishing it.
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  • 0_Jordinio_0
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    発表

    In general, I'm gonna say this is a bad story and don't recommend it. The stability of updates are alright....but everything else is just bad. The writing itself is stunted and monotone with very little description. There's very little gone into of the world itself, literally zero world building and just expects everyone to know everything because it's an established series already. Character design is non existent, again horribly lacking in description of characters. There is zero story development, because despite the fact the main character apparently only knew of up to the fight with the prince and co of the series, he somehow manages to do the exact same crap as Leon All this story does, is follow the same path as Leon, but much more bland. For all the main characters thoughts on Leon having an inferiority complex and wanting girls, he's a massive herbivore that just follows along the same path as Leon without any of his charm. On top of that, he not only has all of Leon's cheats, but an overpowered gamer system on top of that and he's still too afraid to really go against anyone and put them down for their shit like the noble girl looking down on Olivia and shit and full on humiliating her, then attacking him. Same with Jilk, he let that guy get away with trying to kill him. Writing Quality - 2/5 Stability Of Updates - 4/5 Story Development - 1/5 Character Design - 1/5 World Background - 1/5 Honestly, I'd give Story Development, Character Design and World Background a zero to match the zero in the story if I could, but it doesn't go any lower than one. Either way, total score - 1.8/5. Such a shame, I was excited at first when I saw a decently long story for Mobuseka, I should have known better.

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    This isn't High School DxD, damn it!
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  • 0_Jordinio_0
    0_Jordinio_01mth
    に返信 Man_of_culture_69

    Saying a person doesn't like so and so, because a character they wrote doesn't, is buffoonery. Are you a buffoon, or are you a buffoon?

    Ch 6 Chinese Earrings - 4
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  • 0_Jordinio_0
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    に返信 Arcann_Valerious

    Yes. Naruto is the youngest of his graduating class in canon.

    "…I'm….immature?" Sakura sounded ever so shocked behind him.
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  • 0_Jordinio_0
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    に返信 AKASHIIIi

    No actually, potential, completely different thing. The cap on his physical abilities currently at this point in story, is much lower than say Luffy's. Skill and talent itself can only go so far against people who overwhelmingly outclass you in all physical abilities.

    Ch 10 Marine Based - 10
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  • 0_Jordinio_0
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    に返信 _Nanashi_

    Yeah and? The problem guys like you have, is that you don't understand growth at all. You expect a problem to be fixed immediately, when it's never that simple.

    He noticed Grayfia's eyes snap to him and narrow lightly at him. He raised his eyebrows at her challengingly.
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  • 0_Jordinio_0
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    に返信 Rex_Xenovius1998

    You're not wrong, he gets dominated by his wives in that timeline.

    Well, he wasn't really wrong. Even when offered anything in the other timeline, the guy pussied out.
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  • 0_Jordinio_0
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    に返信 Naruto_uzumaki_7792

    You won't be missed.

    Ch 10 Marine Based - 10
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  • 0_Jordinio_0
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    に返信 KingOfAbyss

    Fanon, the only knowledge known is he's slightly above average for a Japanese guy.

    "Keep telling yourself that, one day it might actually reach five inches." Kaito snorted again, crossing his arms and tilting his chin up, just to make sure he knew how much he looked down on him.
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  • 0_Jordinio_0
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    に返信 Facez_

    That's awesome! I love how you drew the wings.

    Name: Kaito Evander
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  • 0_Jordinio_0
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    に返信 ranaltor

    The multiplier is luck based, I rolled dice for it. And it doesn't hamper potential, that's just fanon.

    Ch 68 Kaito Evander As Of (That One Training Arc - 2)
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  • 0_Jordinio_0
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    に返信 JONTY_

    No, cuz that's not how the system works. It's not a level up showing jumps, it's showing as it is at that moment.

    Durability: 54/500
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  • 0_Jordinio_0
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    に返信 JONTY_

    Yeah.

    Arondight
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  • 0_Jordinio_0
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    コメント
    Ch 68 Kaito Evander As Of (That One Training Arc - 2)
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  • 0_Jordinio_0
    0_Jordinio_01mth
    コメント
    Alright then, a lot of guys have been asking what Kaito's general abilities are like and what he looks like. So I'll be putting a pic of him up beside the name and in this paragraph. 
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  • 0_Jordinio_0
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    コメント

    There ya go.

    Name: Kaito Evander
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