DragonGod

5

Loving the story👍

I am loving the story so far so good job! Personally, I do not think adding gamers into the story is a good thing because it is overused in a lot of fanfics. What about the Reapers from Mass Effect? They make a hard enemy from numbers alone.

3

Too much angst in this story. it started out good but now it is starting to be repetitive and honestly annoying. Nice try though. Dropped

MC has knowledge about what is gonna happen and who is dangerous but is so lazy and dimwitted even if he does have an op power he would not know how to use it right if it slapped him