PleadingCat

Lv3

Give this poor cat a fish...

2019-05-12 入りましたGlobal

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ライティング

251.8h

読書の

497

本を読む

バッジ

瞬間

526

PleadingCat3 years ago
発表
Translation wise, it's trash af... no one even bothered to read what they translated, hell, they didnt even translate it, but used ChatGPT instead.At chapter 2, chinese characters are still intact and was not translated. The flow of the story is basically staying inside his home and watching Wras his neighbors fight with each other. He then 'plots' to take revenge on his so called 'bitch'.Although the story is kinda bland but overall it's still readable besides the translation.Just get the raws and translate it to ChatGPT than reading here. Too much ads, I mean I coild stomach the ads but the translation.. nu-uh..Writing Quality 1Story Development 3Character Design 3Updating Stab 5World Background 2Overall 2.8
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PleadingCat3 years ago
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huh? tf?
In the end, Zhang Yi led a group of people to break in. Not only did they rob him of all his resources, but they even dismembered him and ate him.
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PleadingCat3 years ago
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Imagine if he was reborn in an alternate reality where the apocalypse never happened and all he got was the "superpower".
"Here comes the apocalypse!"
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PleadingCat3 years ago
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He clearly remembered that after the apocalypse, Liu Qilong's family ran out of supplies. He first ate the husky and tried to break into his house to snatch supplies, but he failed.
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PleadingCat3 years ago
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That aint how a business work kid...
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PleadingCat3 years ago
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Taking advantage of this, Chen Rou'er moved in for a kiss, only to be met with a sudden slap across the face as Ye Xingchen reacted in time.
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PleadingCat3 years ago
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If it weren't for him witnessing Chen Rou'er kneeling in front of that robust man, eagerly opening her mouth, to please him.
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PleadingCat3 years ago
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Designing isn't as simple as making egg fried rice. This guy must be dreamin' or somethin'.
"I want to see your design tonight. Tomorrow, I want to see your excavators digging the foundation. If not, I'll find someone else."
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PleadingCat3 years ago
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True
"Look at how deceiving this guy appears. Who would have thought he's involved with such a gold-digging woman? She has no shame! Even a prostitute is more dignified than her, at least they're straightforward!"
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PleadingCat3 years ago
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Sharingan in One Piece

In the darkness, there is light but is it bright enough to illuminate the way? He lives through pain and suffering, seeking vengeance on those who sin, he lurks through the dark as his lustrous eyes shine through the silent night. Mountains of corpses are littered around his path, will he change his path or will he continue? Watch him grow as he encompasses his journey to choose either to reinforce justice or to change the law of justice. ---------------------- The story may have plotholes since I'm only a beginner but it can be improved as we went on to our journey. The story is slow-paced since I want to make the character grow and also the people around him. I kinda want it to become a little realistic but expect a lot of mistakes. The R-18 isn't about what you're thinking, it is about verbal and violence. -Take note: English is not my first language

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