First of all, amazing writing. I like how I can vividly picture the scenes from word to word. Secondly, great storyline. I would love to read more chapters, but in the meantime, I guess I have to wait. Character designs are great, I can picture how they look like as you describe every part of them little by little. Overall, a very great novel to read. Looking forward to future chapters, Author!

It comes down mostly to writing pace, i see. Thank you very much!

Not violent, too.

Yeeaaahhh

Perhaps...

All I can say is, I'm impressed. The characters are great, but I like Ivy and her personality more than anyone, in my opinion. She's definitely my type of woman, if I could, I would date her. Regardless of my personal interest, I like the story, it has great potential. That potential will surely blossom into success as the story progresses. Keep it up!

I'm gonna give an honest review in this one. I think the story is great, a story showing the point of view of the main character is what I like. It's not like I'm good at grammar and writing but, I think improving grammar like using a comma and such would really help your story shine even more.

Hello to all readers, Author here! I just want to clarify something the genre of my story. I've recently learned about the changes in the genre system, more particularly the removal of romance in order to have stories like mine to not get mistaken as a story about nothing but full romance. I was elated to hear about it, however, the changes doesn't seem to have been fully implement as the word Romance remained still right next to the Fantasy Genre. Now, romance is good and all. But i don't plan on putting romance elements in the story, at least not in the earlier parts of it since the main plot of my book is about the main protagonist trying to live in peace and without trouble in another world using her magic system. If you're a reader looking for romance, you are more than welcome to read my book. However, you shouldn't expect to see any form of romance until the story have progressed further. That's all! Thank you all for understanding!

I see that you're good at describing things, the chemistry of arby and glenn is something I like about having friends. Lessening the dialogue and putting it on the same level as doing narration would make the story even better. At least in my opinion. The story have less than 10 chapters, no way that's enough to determine how great your story will be in the future. But i will put 5 stars just because i like reading the dialogues, especially reading the conversation arby and glenn had in the first chapter!

Thank you very much for your review, I'll keep that in mind!

I just want to say, i feel like i'm reading a story about myself. Though i'm not as brave as your MC to be jumping off a skyscraper. I can see that your very first story possessed great potential. I look forward to see you improve further with your future chapters and i will try to do the same with mine!

I don't know if it's because I like really strong female protagonists, but ever since the first chapter, I was so hooked to the badass female main character that i almost forgot about the time replaying the scenes in my head while I read every moment. The characters are great, story telling is amazing that I wish I could do the same. And overall, very very good read!!

Hello, everyone. I am the author of Christa Scarletblood: Unetched History. I noticed that even after finishing the story, there are still people reading it. So I thought maybe you can also read the new story I'm writing. Here's the link to my new story: https://***.google.com/amp/s/m.webnovel.com/amp/book/18567003306321805 I made a lot of errors, especially with writing, when I was writing Christa Scarletblood. I'm afraid I might still do the same in my new story. So if you think I made even just a tiniest error, feel free to leave a comment or review about it so I can avoid doing it again and again. Thank you very much!

I've been reading the Manhwa version of this series and I liked it since the beginning. But sadly one chapter a week isn't enough for me so i had to go and spoil myself lmao. Whatever the case this series gets a high rating for me.