KinDa reminds me of mystic EyeS of death perception

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She going to have a child that his Isnt she??

The storY is great and all but it would be Better if sora and his lovers could show affection to each other outside of( you know what). st this point it just feel like there sleeping with him just because he is there king.

Nice chapter

Nah he cant beat goku the only power he has shown is at maximum solar system+. Goku should at least be beTween universal plus to multiversal. If you want a better explaination just wAtch seththeprogrammer video on it he does a good job expaining this.

Zod man of steel movie

It was pretty good to be honest

I hope no more of his friends die bro. Its gets annoying really fast.

His life force is been sensed throughout the marvel universes which make Him a a delicious to anyone who eats life foRce

I understand your point of view and I agree innocent die all the time in war. However, the intention of killua was to kill everyone it didn't matter if they were enemies are not. That type of stuff is very uncomfortable to read about. I'm on web novel to relax and read about people lives in a fantasy-type situation. Good luck with your story author.

I don't mind wanting revenge against the empire that cause their suffering but was it really worth it killing all those innocent people for nothing just to get their real enemies to pay attention. I really liked this story a lot but I cannot support unnecessary, innocent, senseless slaughter just as a show of might. I think that's it for this story for me I wish you success in your future chapters.

Your obviously not reading the story because he litErally explain all the questions you just asked in the previous chapters.

Kaito kid?

Was he on break from school the whole time after whole rejection situation?

If their curses are the complete oppositE Couldnt she just work with him so they could balance each other out.

Thats one of the biggest plot twist i have seen in a long time.

I just Dont understant Why some protaganist dont make or find something to make their loverS immortal with them. I know so might say some people dont want to live forever and i get that but itS better to have and offer it with the few people who want to stay with you.

Honestly Bro this fic has a lot a potential. The new relationship seemS alittle forced especially when a chapter before he was just starting to get over being rejected. Stick to your orriginal idea of making the girls jealous and avoid them alittle. You dont have to rush right into the action just put it in when it feels right. I also Liked the Character development in past chapters it gave us an idea wHat type of person the protagonIst is. I recomend reading endless path infinite Cosmos if want An example of a good story. Good luck with tHe story.

Honestly you do you bro. Its better to post once in a while that not at all.