ElisabethSuelli

Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying them so far! I should be able to bring out the second part of The Fall of Grace soon!

Thank you so much! I'm really trying to make these short stories cohesive but also keep the surreal nightmarish elements of me dreams in them!

Thank you, I'm glad you've enjoyed the chapters so far!! I am working on sprucing up the second part of The Fall of Grace, so I hope you will check it out once I post it!

Thank you so much!! The stories are based on nightmares I've had, of course restructured to be more cohesive and understandable

This is definitely an interesting read, and I am curious to find out how the story will continue to develop! The writing starts off a little confusing, but I'm confident it will only get better and better!

The story is good and the first chapter gives a good sense of the story's potential to be truly great! The writing quality struggles a little between past and present tense, but if you can get past that, the story is a gripping read.

I enjoyed this story, I'm not even in the fandom but I was able to understand what was going on. So give this story a read, you won't be disappointed.

Go give this story a read! The fantasy setting does not distract from the all too real pain of those suffering from unrequited love. I'm excited to see how the story will further develop, and you should be too!