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huh?!
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he needs to reward my boy Toros generously and soon!
pls less filler chapters
doves should be droves here
i like this chapter, last chapter’s second half… not so much. It’s not foreshadowing when you tell us exactly what the outcome of the war is. Maybe place the Rubrum Trivia of the afermath if an event where consequences go, after the events. Just a suggestion that would make it more enjoyable to read in my opinion.
murder!
honestly in my head i thought he was reading what move they were doing so nobody was ever yelling their skills to cast it
what a fella!
uh oh