Azdal

Its the Bewilderbeast isnt it?

I’m pretty sure Beerus is either the strongest GoD or second strongest. He’s no joke.

Good chapters. Thank you

He’s not a good person, lol. His alignment is already neutral evil.

Millicas’s potential is extremely immense, so when does he start training????

10 hours of reading is crazy

I know you probably have no control over this story, but i believe the path forward is 1 form with limitless potential, not endlessly transforming, even dragonball itself has switched to that dynamic, with the likes of Ultra Ego and Ultra Instinct.

I think this story is really good and has immense potential, but one thing im worried about is the boomerang narrative device. How 1 chapter follows 1 character’s pov/story, next chapter another, so on and so on. I think that form of storytelling is very limited and frustrating. Most people here will care about 1 character more than the others, they wont want to wait 3 more chapters to get back to Goku. I think you either need to make chapters bigger, condense them, or change the narrative device completely.

If it was the original DBZ Goku i’d agree 100%, idk now. I do think its between Death of the Endless and WW

I caught up already, thats depressing. This is a really good story.