hey, i am glad that you sre liking it so far, and thank you for the review!

thank you for the review. i promise it will speed up soon😁

im glad you liked the start, and trust me when i say, there are many more climaxes to come..and twists and turns. far better than anything before

thank you so much! I promise it will be interesting and far different to anything ive done before thank you for the support it helps and means alot

So i just read all three chapters(as far as the book goes currently)I'm enjoying myself a lot so far, a new world filled with the unknown, and the author is really showing that off.It is a really good book, so please do not stop writing it at all. I'll keep reading at my own pace, and once the novel has got around 40 or so chapters I'll review again.See you soon!

Wow its my birthday

in an "instant"

a great chapter

'why don't you just tell me' you missed the you

made me smile. Acting like someone far older suddenly

check the wording here especially around the laid down part.

i can feel the drama building..what a chapter

It is a good novel so far, yes it is on the darker side. But i am just loving it as well as loving how the author is portraying the world so far. I am a huge fan already, so I definitely would recommend this novel 10/10

any, not anu

empress is the spelling... i did not see before, but it'll be best to check the spelling of the word in past uses of it.

re read this chapter, and make sure the words flow. Eg 'The Empress wanted to...'

Space between words is missing.

I can not say what yet, if anything the chapter seems to say the same thing, or well a similar thing in to many ways. Confusing me as i read.

waist, and not wait i guess.

Keep an eye on spacing, between punctation and the new word.