daydreamer_no1

I think this is done by a.i usually it's barely felt like it but this ch has more of it felt in it

my life I've only just realized that.

that's like actually on point asf it pissed me off because the start was actually really amazing and then he became a marine and turned into a disappointment, like at first I didn't like him being a marine and not a bounty hunter or pirate but I was like "meh I'll give it a go" then he found out he died again to that float float guy and just lost his brain and balls.

it's because he keeps being a idiotic coward and purposely fks up just to stay "lowkey"

you are doing amazing honestly but maybe instead of kind of speedeunning the things that happened during the time skip go more into the time and slow down a bit if that makes sense? like it's his time of rest so I wanna feel it not be told it? I hope I'm making sense but anyway you're doing good

Morgan's fruit powers: cancel cancel fruit can cancel anybody he dislikes in but a single news paper...how terrifying

that's not really impressive in one piece lol that's still pre new world power levels castles are literally nothing in one piece.

that's exactly how I felt tbh like we didn't know enough about the Mc then bam pulled out that "emotional" trial outa nowhere and ya expecting me to care enough about some side character from his past, it just didn't hit like it was supposed to

but I thought there was no cursed energy?

I wish most authors did this for their fics this honestly told me the right amount of info needed that's important if your Mc is going to another world as someone with a power system that's different to world they are going to, I haven't even read the first ch and I already like this fic