It's been a great start so far. Tony Stark usually gets all the love, so it is nice to see the other super-genius, Reed, get some. I hope you keep posting.

Great story, the only downside is that the MC's has a lot of Pokemon with great battle talent. But he does nothing with them even though they want to get stronger. Although the second volume seems to be addressing that.

The translation to English is pretty bad. The name of people or Pokemon change throughout a chapter. The MC does not have much to any charisma, with most of the dialogue being carried by the establish characters in One Piece.

So the MC is a live streamer that is playing in one piece. Half of a chapter is a pointless chat group. There are other players in the world that the author refers to as a "Dungeon". The MC is op by chapter 10.

The story is well-written but has a lot of character bloat. Many chapters go over the side characters and their training. Also, the author tries to pair each Strawhat with a love interest, which comes off as cringe-worthy; not every character needs a love story.