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are you dropping this

I don't like the original either it is not about ruining the original story it is about having a child too early

i didn't know that you are going to make Qian renxue pregnant getting the main character a child this early just ruined the whole story

the grammar is atrocious I can't make head or tail about this one .

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he has a system that can raise his skill to God level but can't even fight what appointment that has three to four small ralms power difference

I like your other fanfic King of the Seven Realms more the MC is just too pathetic in this one but I will still support you

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Shadow Monarch power

I play some of the game myself and I really hated it that's why I'm going to give you 3star