CaptKay
I love writing short-stories. Do you like reading one?
ライティング
読書の
14
本を読む
Copy and paste...
I just glossed over the last 4 pages and I'm not impressed. However, before attackers would start coming at me, good critique makes a great book. This has lingered long with unnecessarily detailed explanations of every move, look and whatnot. However, you are doing good Legion.